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  • The room was a mess
  • The floor was camouflaged with clothes and the smell of Amelia’s stinky socks filled the room. A cyclone had hit the closet.
  • The food was good
  • Steam rose higher than the empire building and the smell of hot food filled my nose.
  • The teacher was mad
  • Her eyes stared through her glasses and into

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